Caligula's Launderette

written_on_my_heart, As far as poems go, this is not really that exciting or different. It reads like any of the numerous emo poems out there. And, if that is what ...

I have read other works by McEwan and it seems like they are better executed than Atonement . I haven't read it or seen the movie yet, though I plan ...

Hello abbisnail, First things first, what I enjoyed: > I thought the visual layout of this poem was spot on. Especially in the second stanza. > I enjoyed the concrete ...

Hi Derek, If you have any questions what so ever about anything feel free to shout out or PM me. Now, onto the critique. ... Book 1: Fabled Chapter 1: ...

Allo, ma cherie. The first thing that I really like about this poem is the polarity of what seems like choice, chosen diction against more pedestrian terms. I really like ...

Palantalid, I have read your poem and what you said it meant; I have also read what my fellows, Cade and Suze have said. I agree with both of them, ...

Here is my critique. It’s half way to a proper critique, but I hope it helps you out. There is a list of overall notes and questions at the end, ...

Hey, I think you need to flesh out a longer, more involved chapter, bring everything together. Cause this is just a taste. Hope this helps, Cal.

Sam, I love you! It is so wonderful and there is not much critique-y wise to say. Ta, Cal.

Hey Rieda, I'm back. You know the drill, shout out if you have any questions. KASEY AND MR. FRIENDLY POLICEMAN DUDE The cop and his actions really confused me. Why ...

Hiya, honey. I didn't realize that there was a prologue, so I went straight to the first chapter. So, here it goes. If you have any questions or my handwriting ...

Gyr, here it is. The drill is if something doesn't make sense or my handwriting is just that atrocious shout out to me. :P KANE AND MITRA Reading over the ...

Hey Rieda, This has been in my stack for awhile now, but I finally got around to finishing it. :D If there is anything that is unclear or my handwriting ...

kayles, I think you need to put space breaks between you paragraphs, if only to make it easier for us to read. I loved this piece, it was so very ...

Oh, wow, hon. I think this has become one of my favorites of yours. Especially -- These days we are reminded that we are / the haunted, not the haunts, ...